Mixed Bag
I liked it as a whole. The idea was fun and original. I didn't like the repetitiveness of the heroine throughout the story tho. She harped on the same thing over and over again. I also felt like certain details were unnecessary, and other parts had conversations that just didn't make sense. It felt like she just popped them in because they were important but it didn't flow right. However, I thought the MC was genuine and extremely caring. I also liked the side characters, they added depth. It was a pretty good first novel, hopefully the second will be better, and the heroine will grow up
